Goal 1: Composing with Pictures
Strategy Go back to your picture(s). Point to the part or picture that teaches
something important about your topic. Touch or turn to the next part. Tell what
new fact about your topic this part of the picture or this page teaches.
Lesson Language If I wrote or drew to teach, then when I read my writing back
I'm going to make it sound like a teaching book. I'm going to tell my reader the facts
I wrote about. Let me show you. I drew a picture of a big T. rex. I know a lot about
them so I added a lot of details in my picture. I'm going to touch one part and teach
what that part says. "The T. rex had very large jaws with big sharp teeth." Now I'm
going to touch a new part and teach what that part says. "The T. rex had very short
arms. It would only run using its hind legs."
Goal 2: Engagement - Independence, Increasing Volume, and Developing a Writing Identity
Strategy First, identify the problem you're having. Then, check the spot in the
room, a resource, or a friend that might help you solve the problem. Try a solution.
If it doesn't work, try something else.
Teaching Tip This strategy, like "Use the Room" that appears earlier in this
chapter, assumes that there are things in the room that can be helpful, and that
you've taught children how to use them. For example, in a primary classroom a
word wall may help a writer to spell high-frequency words. If you've introduced
and used mentor texts, then having these available for children to reference on their
own could help them. Sometimes the problem might be that they need to work
in a new spot in the room because of the amount of distractions at their current
spot. Brainstorm possible problems with your students, and come up with a list of
resources and solutions. Or, this strategy can be like a culmination of past teaching
from this and other chapters.
Goal 3: Generating and Collecting Ideas
Strategy Decide on a new place to visit. Go there with no more than a notebook and a set of listening ears and observing eyes. Let yourself pick up on conversation and details of the person. Jot down what you observe, and also what you imagine, about the people you see.
Teaching Tip This strategy will take you outside of the classroom, so it would work well as a whole-class lesson followed by a field trip, or as a suggestion to a student, group, or class for independent writing outside of the school day.
Goal 4: Focus/Meaning
Strategy Think about a memory and all the events that are part of that memory. Think about what's important about that memory, or the big idea the memory leaves you with. Identify the one part of the memory that feels the most important. Write some ideas about what's important about it, and why it's important. Try to write just that one smaller part of the larger moment. Tell it bit by bit.
Teaching Tip The amount a writer will be able to reflect on the overall significance of a small moment will depend on her maturity level and experience with writing. For younger children, you may want to suggest choosing a small moment that will make a good story, rather than one imbued with a deep or heavy significance, or simply encourage them to narrow down the window of time
Goal 5: Organization and Structure
Strategy Before beginning to draft, visualize the shape of what you're going to make. Create some sort of quick visual, in pictures or in words, to represent the overarching structure. As you write, check back to see where you are in your plan.
Teaching Tip This is going to be most helpful after students have learned a variety of ways to structure their pieces and have been introduced to a variety of graphic organizers that would help them to organize, or shape, the information into a structure.
Goal 6: Elaboration
Strategy Think about the subtopics for which you'll want to collect information. Write each of your subtopics as a heading on a notebook or booklet page. As you find new information for your topic, think, "What page in my notebook should this go on? Which subtopic does it provide details for?"
Lesson Language I just found this interesting fact: Ballerinas really wear out their shoes. Many go through as many as 2-3 pairs per week! I'm going to look across the pages of my booklet to see where this would best fit. Would it belong in the section called "Types of Ballet Positions?" No, that's not about the positions. Would it go in the section called "Famous Ballets?" No. "What Ballerinas Wear?" Well, I do talk about pointe shoes in this section, so it might be cool to add this fact about how many pairs of pointe shoes the average ballerina needs. I'll keep the fact here.
Goal 7: Word Choice
Strategy Find all the action verbs in your piece. Focus on any that you think aren't as clear, precise, or exact as they could be. List several options for what might replace that word (use a thesaurus if you need it!). Choose the word that best matches your meaning.
Teaching Tip For this strategy to work, children will need to understand what an action verb is, so identification of verbs is a first step in this strategy. Many teachers weave in some instruction during other balanced literacy components such as word study, read-aloud, and/or shared reading. You could also plan to teach direct minilessons to the class or small groups for those who do not understand parts of speech.
Goal 8: Conventions - Spelling and Letter Formation
Strategy When trying to spell a word, try to visualize where you've seen it
written and how you've seen it written before. It may help to close your eyes. Then,
in a margin or on a piece of scrap paper, write how you think it's spelled. Try it a
second or maybe even third way. Look back at what you've written and ask yourself,
"Which of these tries looks right to me?"
Prompts
- Check off the parts that look right to you.
- Write the word as you think you’ve seen it before.
- Which parts look right? Which part looks off?
- Do you think there are some letters missing?
- What part of that word is tricky for you?
- The part you’re trying to spell is also in the word _______. Does that help?
Goal 9: Conventions - Grammar and Punctuation
Strategy Find two sentences that talk about the same topic. Think about the
relationship between those sentences. Choose a connector word and try combining
the sentences into one. Reread and decide if you like the combined way or original
way better.
Lesson Language Here’s one spot in my draft where I have two sentences that I
think go well together. I wrote: “A dog is something that can keep you company. A dog
can cheer you up.” What’s the relationship between those two sentences? They both have
to do with something that is positive about owning a dog, so I think they are related. I’m
adding more information on. I’ll try using and to combine those sentences: “A dog can
keep you company and cheer you up.” Here’s another spot: “I would love to have a dog.
My mom won’t let me have a dog.” What’s the relationship between those two sentences?
The second sentence gives more information that feels in contrast to the first. I’ll combine
them with however: “I would like to have a dog, however my mom won’t let me.” The
new sentence I made seems clearer and more to the point.
Goal 10: Collaborating with Writing Partners and Clubs
Strategy Talk with your partner about your goals (for the writing period, for the week, and/or for writing work to take place at home, and so on). Discuss together how you might get that work done. Write the goal, and make the promise...then check in with your partner soon.
Teaching Tip Reflect on your own life and goals you've set out to accomplish. Now think about how successful you've been and whether or not you made your goals public ahead of time. I know that when I share my goals with my partner, my friends, my colleagues, my editor, I am more likely to get things done. The built-in accountability, the opportunity to celebrate together, the lifeline of support in case something does not go according to plan—these are invaluable.
